If you’re writing your own film business plan from scratch, you’re probably a producer or director, or someone extremely close to the film. Chances are, you may even be in love with the script, the producing team’s awesome vibe, and that heart-pounding excitement of getting a film off the ground. So that means there’s a good chance you’re going to muck up your film’s synopsis when it comes time to include it in your business plan.
By “muck up,” I mean – write it from a producer/creative viewpoint, rather than approaching it from the viewpoint of a potential film investor.
When folks are in love with the script, or the project, or they’re simply writing the synopsis from the viewpoint of a creative person aboard the film, they tend to forget that a potential film investor doesn’t necessarily want to read every single detail in the synopsis. Some do, yes, but remember the most important job of a film business plan is to help convince the potential investor (along with other documents, interactions, and marketing materials) to invest in your film.
When you hand them your film business plan, you also need to hand them your script. If they want a lot of details, or to read every emotional beat, they can read the script.
In other words, a synopsis in a business plan is not the same beast as a synopsis outside of a business plan. You want it to be brief, 1 page maximum, and you want to cover the major story beats, and THAT’S IT. Big blocks of text in a business plan tend to cause potential investor’s eyes to glaze over, and a synopsis is one big block of text. Your film business plan needs to keep moving, at a brisk pace. Don’t bog it down. Get back to the numbers; the blurbs; the facts.
Demonstrate that you understand the two things that are usually the most important to a potential investor: (a) their precious TIME and (b) HARD DATA. A synopsis can be a time suck to read, but not only that, it’s as far from HARD DATA as you can get in a business plan, because it’s a make-believe story (unless you’re making a documentary) told in one page or less.
- DO make your synopsis brisk, easy to read.
- DO include the major story beats.
- DO keep the potential film investor in mind while writing your synopsis.
- DO get someone who’s not close to your film to synopsize your script. (Or pay a company)
- DON’T lard up the synopsis with tons of details. Every detail you list is one more detail an investor can dislike.
- DON’T use the same synopsis in the business plan as you’re using for other things.
- DON’T give two versions of the synopsis in the business plan.
- DON’T get cute in the synopsis or include “notes” or “asides” or “cast name actors for illustrative purposes” in your synopsis.
- DON’T slap one long, unbroken paragraph of text onto the page.
Major story beats only. And make sure you tell an interesting story with those story beats. (If you can’t, you may want to rethink the project or rewrite the script.)
Remember – if they want a lot of detail, they can ask you or they can RTFS. (Read the @*$#%^ Script!) And either of those can be a great way to draw your potential film investor in more, and potentially boost your chances of her investing in your film.







